I have been redesigning my business card to give it a more grown up aspect. I would like to know what you think. What parts do you like what would you change?

Please be gentle with me!

All the photos are my own.

The others

I am really sorry

not impressed at all, just too safe, conservative (unless this is your customer?)

I would like to be more constitutive, but will think on it

Hmmmmm.....
To make them look professional, they need changing.

For a start the top ones don't look the right size, they look too tall for business cards.
The images on the top one's don't really pop out and sell it! And the FB logo's look weird as they have different background.

The bottom ones need more work.... They are too busy! Overlapping things doesn't seem the best to me.

To me a business card needs to be clear and to the point... Name, contact info, and a brief description.... Or caption maybe..

Less is sometimes more :-)

Jordan

http://www.google.co.uk/imgres?imgurl=h ... 29,r:3,s:0

Maybe use this...

Regarding the FB bit would it not be better to just list your pages url like you would your website as it gets prospective clients directly to your page rather than making them have to find you.  Also worth remembering the logo when actually printed will be tiny and possibly even illegible.  Have you tried printing them out at actual size and seeing how they look?

www.facebook.com/YOURPAGENAME

Something like the above maybe? on a smaller scale...

Ask yourself these 2 questions....

#1 What do you want people to do when they have your card in their hand.

#2 What do you want the card to do for you.

Now look at your card.

Your contact details look very suspicious me.

Mobile only? (What legit business does not have a land line)

No proper email address? (No website)

What is the facebook logo on there for?