I've been playing again. At school I mark with 2 stars and a wish! What 2 things do you like and what is the one thing you might change to make it better?

I can't seem to blow up the business card up to a size to see :cry:

It won't let me upload a bigger version!

Is this business card size? If so the images look way to small, a good size picture sells. I found Robbie Furman's advertising material from The Millennium Jam
where it is a four page booklet that opens out, it has so much impact.
Could you not do an A4 divided into three with 5 sides being pictures and 1 side contact info?

Hi Snurb, Just a thought.I was given some marketing tips by a client some years ago. He told me that the most important thing on your card should be your name, address and direct contact point.The second is who, or what your business is.When you find an old card the first thought is Who gave it to me? then Why did I keep it?
   I experimented with a slightly bigger card.He asked me what it was for? If it was a business card it would not fit in a card wallet or on a desk top container.If it was to act as an advertising tool then it should be designed as such.Decide which you want and focus on making it the best.
   The type of type face used is also very important.When a new client looks at the card is it clearly legible? Some types of script look fine on bigger format but lose out on business card size.I agreee with Graham the picture size may look far too small when printed.Be sure to get a proof before printing.Sometimes less is more,
             Brendan.